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Three days I've been roofing in sun
I've done battle with sunburn- it won
The hue of my skin
Is lobster-akin
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I wondered if number eight was up so I checked and wow a great limerick Metre is right rhymes are great. a ten
I saw you the other day and it looked painful. I would suggest it (Sunscreen) at least for your face. I hope Wes reads this, as he has inspired another limericist. Very well done, good flow and a punctuated ending.
I would suggest turtles grow wheels so they don't have to flip through the sand like that... But you don't hear me preachin. Jeez Only joking. Thanks
I don't like to use sunscreen either, in spite of the fact that I have a history of skin cancer. I think all of them feel greasy. I do wear a cowboy hat outdoors most of the time. Nice limerick.
Greasy and smelly... If I wanted to be those things I'd be a fry cook at a skunk steak house
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7/28/2025 2:22:49 AM # 1.0.0
Well written about the heat you were observing.