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Not here, not there, not anywhere,
peacefully I was sleeping alone somewhere,
neither I was seen nor I was touched,
I spoke to myself and was never heard,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 January 2016

Verily, man feels loneliness even amid a large crowd and his dear ones. The feeling of loneliness is well expressed

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Kelly Kurt 09 January 2016

There is an intrinsic loneliness inherent with being a human. Trapped in our mind but able to interact. Able to feel profound loneliness in a large crowd

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Valsa George 09 January 2016

but the winds that brought a cloud for me, left loneliness and a shroud for me At one time or the other, we feel lonely in life! To feel lonely in a crowd also is not unnatural! Man is gregarious by nature. Most men detest solitude unless otherwise made through voluntary choice! A beautiful poem picturing a state of mind of gloomy thoughts!

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Khalida Bano Ali 09 January 2016

A nice poem on deception in love resulting in a loneliness.

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