Monday, May 17, 2010

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Heart thomping
Blood pumping
In and out
Through veins and arteries
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Sarnath Mukherjee
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Ayan Dasgupta 22 May 2010

['My brain / Thinking / The steps of drinking / A glass of water /...'] Excellent - Magnifico... must say that you have really gotten into the moment there, the beauty of inconsequentiality caught in these lines takes me to aesthetic height. I don't know about those who call it crass existentialism - even if it is - then also I'm for it! A tenner for your thoughts.

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