....water from the tap - can’t put it back
.................toothpaste - tried to put it back
..................gossiping - behind my back
..............angry words - can’t take them
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wowww, he he, i really enjoyed reading this.why, this is unusual poetry and it is at its best. and..may i add also with this.. Ben Gieski........PLEASE COME BACK with more of this... lol
This poem made me smile, laugh and ponder. May I add another line somewhere: Arnold Schwarzenegger - I'll be back! I didn't know you can bring your art to different levels. May I give you 10 for humor and creativity.
So much of what you put down here was so true. This is a way of poetry I've never seen. BRILLIANT! ! !
When you say it like that...I guess we're back alot.