Sunday, May 20, 2007

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Rating: 3.0

....water from the tap - can’t put it back
.................toothpaste - tried to put it back
..................gossiping - behind my back
..............angry words - can’t take them
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Ben Gieske
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I Am Charlie 18 June 2009

When you say it like that...I guess we're back alot.

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Meggie Gultiano 31 March 2009

wowww, he he, i really enjoyed reading this.why, this is unusual poetry and it is at its best. and..may i add also with this.. Ben Gieski........PLEASE COME BACK with more of this... lol

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Jemarie Ragudo 16 December 2007

This poem made me smile, laugh and ponder. May I add another line somewhere: Arnold Schwarzenegger - I'll be back! I didn't know you can bring your art to different levels. May I give you 10 for humor and creativity.

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Theresa Moore 05 September 2007

profound transitions and links...Liked this one a lot!

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Raul Castelan 05 September 2007

So much of what you put down here was so true. This is a way of poetry I've never seen. BRILLIANT! ! !

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