Monday, May 4, 2009

Back Through Time Comments

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I’d give anything to go back through time
I’d break the piggy bank and surrender every dime
To again re-live all the past, precious moments
Go back when I got my first kiss
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Allen Henriette
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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

A rather true reality is well narrated in this poem. Everyone has elapsed golden moments that at certain age can have a reclaiming effect on your mind wanting you to go back with the best time machine you have i.e., the brain in your imaginations. One always wish to have those pleasant memories to have repeated curls but it is practically not possible. So a rather non-pragmatic theme but a fact otherwise is well lit in this beautiful poem Allen......10/10

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