Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Back On My Feet! Comments

Rating: 5.0

It hurt even to crack a smile
or part my lips to speak,
So parched I was_
That I could not bear others
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Romeo Della Valle
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Meera Panigrahi 09 September 2012

The come back is amazingly real

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Irisa Salkic 28 July 2012

This is an amazing poem! ! :) you're really good! Can totally relate! : D

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Pheko Motaung 02 May 2012

Brilliant work come back kid with a masterpiece! Congratulations

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 April 2012

Brilliant Steel Nerved Poem... 'Vide...Tasting a new life without fear, /Like the King of the Hill...]... Hope is main thing even when in back gear..front [read top] Gear will soon come thanks for sharing tenner Regards ~ niv PS Please read my 'Eve Niv' n

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Sossi Khachadourian 24 April 2012

That I could not bear others To know me so weak. And I agree! Nice poem my friend: -) Blessings and best wishes! Sossi

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Captain Cur 22 April 2012

I loved the beginning lines to this poem. We have all felt those emotions at one time or other in our lives. Keep up the great work. Captain Cur

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Sara Fielder 20 April 2012

“Patience and fortitude conquer all things” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson...and dare I say faith and trust must surely be mixed in there somewhere as well. I think that there are is a race of men (and women) that just roll over and die when they give up hope. I'm glad you didn't!

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Neela Nath Das 19 April 2012

A poem on strong optimism, and self respect.Terrific!

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Heather Wilson 19 April 2012

Oh, well done, what a return, you did it in style, a beautiful poem

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Sharad Juneja 18 April 2012

Very beautiful... inspiring... a great poem.. i can only say thanx for inviting me

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Sharad Juneja 18 April 2012

beautiful..... amazing.............inspiring........ i have nothing more left to say

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