It hurt even to crack a smile
or part my lips to speak,
So parched I was_
That I could not bear others
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This is an amazing poem! ! :) you're really good! Can totally relate! : D
Brilliant work come back kid with a masterpiece! Congratulations
Brilliant Steel Nerved Poem... 'Vide...Tasting a new life without fear, /Like the King of the Hill...]... Hope is main thing even when in back gear..front [read top] Gear will soon come thanks for sharing tenner Regards ~ niv PS Please read my 'Eve Niv' n
That I could not bear others To know me so weak. And I agree! Nice poem my friend: -) Blessings and best wishes! Sossi
I loved the beginning lines to this poem. We have all felt those emotions at one time or other in our lives. Keep up the great work. Captain Cur
“Patience and fortitude conquer all things” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson...and dare I say faith and trust must surely be mixed in there somewhere as well. I think that there are is a race of men (and women) that just roll over and die when they give up hope. I'm glad you didn't!
Oh, well done, what a return, you did it in style, a beautiful poem
Very beautiful... inspiring... a great poem.. i can only say thanx for inviting me
beautiful..... amazing.............inspiring........ i have nothing more left to say
The come back is amazingly real