Back In Time Comments

A very nice poem, nicely written, and love the topic.

great little write - the angle on your shoulder

To me good inciteful poetry is not always written in long verse or many stanzas. You my friend pour so much into your style and it leaves the reader with thoughts to think as many of your fellow poets commented. Nicely done! ! ! J. L.

This reminds me of how I have had things happen to me that made no sense in regard to the laws of time, space, physics..but I can't deny them because they did happen to me, and to disregard them would mean I would have to totally not believe anything I saw or heard or detected with my physical senses. This makes me much more open to other people's odd experiences; I tend to believe now rather than question. Nice job here.

I really appreciate your writing style, Dave. It is concise and thought provoking. It really left me with a lasting feeling at the end of the page. Thank you for sharing.

I love the poem, reads quite simple, but contains a deep theory inside.

I love this poem as we can gain insight into simultaneity and freedom from the limitations of time for all the three times are in the same entity in sunyata.Truth is to be found in the fourth dimension beyond space and time and if we would know it, we must free ourselves from the limitations.Time after all is quite relative - today is the yesterday of tomorrow and is also the tomorrow of yesterday.In sunyata meditation, yesterday has no going and tomorrow has no coming. The three times all become the same and besides knowing well the present, one may easily have foresight into the future or cause the events of the distant past to be remembered in the present.Well written, reflecting religious teachings.

I love the third stanza =) this poem is really interesting =)

Original thought line that's what writing is about...well done indeed...regards

love it its very well written very inspirational

really nice poem.................a horror poem

I was wondering, what will I feel if I really traveled back in time... It will be a time when I will face myself and judge.. Well written! !

I love this poem...! ! !

An amazing poem....the flow of it was fantastic, genuinely beautiful!

Well done Dave.Yes all the time we must have who gos through us, it's the judgement part of our self, that part which tell us about the right and wrong.

Was God watching over you or your lover? I like the mystery. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

The way this is written mimics how it appears visually especially if read in the dark. So excellently done with a simple grace.

To be, but not to see. To our loved ones, we sometimes turn into ghosts. You say so much with such few words. Fantastic!

Nice writing..i really enjoyed the calmness yet mysteriousness of this. Fantastic -SG

Yeah it's you(future) watching yourself(past) and of course you cant see yourself..Mystery air i feel here...beautiful poem, if we can back to the past and fix all behind we will try to make it better as we know some of the story..Nice theme i like it again and again.. Somehow how can you back to the past? ? wait..wait mean you not a dracula right hahaha joking :) you know, human blood nowadays contaminate with many artificial flavors, preservative so if you a dracula Dave, hmm turn vege hahahahahaha i'm joking again..nice write, continue your smile_Unwritten SOul