Uneasiness filled the air
As a stranger rode into town
Tension was stretched so thin
It was felt by everyone around
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Wow.....a great reminiscence of the old west.....the cowboys era....where the gangsters triumphed horribly.Great old writes Marilyn!
Marillyn, I really like this poem. I love the tale it tells and the message it sends. I like your natural unforced rhyming. A 10 from me. Regards Ron