Tuesday, May 22, 2007

Back In The Old West Comments

Rating: 5.0

Uneasiness filled the air
As a stranger rode into town
Tension was stretched so thin
It was felt by everyone around
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Marilyn Lott
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Ron Flowers 20 June 2009

Marillyn, I really like this poem. I love the tale it tells and the message it sends. I like your natural unforced rhyming. A 10 from me. Regards Ron

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 November 2008

Wow.....a great reminiscence of the old west.....the cowboys era....where the gangsters triumphed horribly.Great old writes Marilyn!

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Marilyn Lott

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