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Thought provoking poem! It opens up one's vision widely to think about many philosophical aspects of life. Great work! David thanks for sharing.

truly speaking the first two stanzas look gr8 after which I lost track. I cudnt follow much the next verses! Hope after reading a couple of times more I will get to understand.

wow i really like this poem really good

This was a very interesting poem, i liked it :)