Monday, January 16, 2006

Back From Holiday Comments

Rating: 3.6

Back from holiday
I had a great time
Now I am back here with a moan
Back to the grind stone
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tiyler durden
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David Darbyshire 16 January 2006

Your back thats good news man, dave

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Poetry Hound 16 January 2006

Hey Tiyler, can you draw comics? Or do you know anyone who can? Your poems would be a terrific accompaniment to a dark comic book about a guy who is always depressed and moaning, sitting in his khaki cube, etc. I don't mean to make light of you, but I think it could be an existential sort of cartoon with dark humor. You could exaggerate how bad things are. Maybe it could be called 'Gloom.' I mean, if we can't laugh at our own situations, then we're REALLY sunk. Just a thought.

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Mary Nagy 16 January 2006

I think your holiday with your parents sounds wonderful Tiyler. I agree with Charles, you're very lucky! Sincerely, Mary

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Charles Chaim Wax 16 January 2006

at least you had some fun others never a taste of good times forever blue, despair constant continual, heart crushed hopes dashed doom in every breath a fine poem

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