Sunday, May 10, 2009

Back Cover Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the back cover of a book called
Wonders of Spiritual Unfoldment
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Wojja Fink
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Original Unknown Girl 13 June 2009

I love this poem, it ticks all the boxes for me. Especially like how you ponder on how the soul conveniently forgets that there is sunshine in us. Sometimes we are so hellbent on chasing clouds that we forget to check out the sunbeams. This poem pays testament to that. Love it. HG: -) xx

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Eyan Desir 13 June 2009

Ok you can write I learn that full marks

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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2009

beautufl lines you gave us wojja takes a keen eye to pick up pearls from dusty shelfs cheers

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Bob Blackwell 24 May 2009

Just as the sun in the heavens, gives light, warms our hearts our mind for free. Our own sun can in different ways achieve the same, and when we tune in to our own sun, we can also do it for free. Thank you for including this poem on your page.

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rago rago 24 May 2009

you have just provided the positive thoughts......your poem speak a lot from its view.......

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LOVEFOOL Aka 23 May 2009

Very life assuring and positive 10+++

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Anjali Sinha 22 May 2009

a thought provoking poem The Sun god Lord Agni obscured sometimes by clouds in the mind Tis in your hands and mine- To hide not the sunshine under that bushel but explore possibilities crucial then portals open wide. a tenner from me anjali

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 May 2009

very visual indeed...great poetic portrayal...thanks for relaxing my mind, and your words have a great depth too.....10++

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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2009

The soul like the sun For ever shines But for clouded vision the soul we malign CP

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Subroto Chatterjee 12 May 2009

The second stanza has poetry written over it....but the 'beholden' part may not hold true in this pragmatic world. Humans (of yore and today's) always had (and will continue to have) how do I put it - 'constraints' which spill into abnormal behavior, such as crime and other desparate acts....cloud or no cloud. Yea..I'm a poet too... Yo Wojja....Wo..Wo! ! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Brian Taylor 10 May 2009

Thank you for sharing John Butler's shining poem! 'A poem opens a window in the prison wall...'

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Delicate Heart 10 May 2009

this poem have many pearls of wisdom that must be taken into consideration..

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