Sun emerged in sky as usual
With full light and looked casual
It was daily mission
With no doubt in any season
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good Dustin2 minutes ago good, reflective although I think I took a different meaning away than perhaps the author intended?
Taranum BhatiaLess than a minute ago the poem nicely captures the teachings which the mother nature has to offer. Comment 0 good
Nasrudheenp ParameswaranLess than a minute ago A fine comparative poem Comment +1 its a nice mix of nature and personal feelings
Colleen Ruiz4 minutes ago Tale of youth Comment +1 Great poem but could use revision.
Violet Schod4 minutes ago Beautiful imagery and story. Double check for clarity and it could be better. Comment +1 Nice Job
Sun emerged in sky as usual With full light and looked casual
nice poem...never part with treasures