Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, July 6, 2013

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Sun emerged in sky as usual
With full light and looked casual
It was daily mission
With no doubt in any season
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Shihabudheen K J 06 July 2013

nice poem...never part with treasures

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good Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 35 minutes ago good

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Michele Carter and Gurdeep Singh Kohli like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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good Dustin2 minutes ago good, reflective although I think I took a different meaning away than perhaps the author intended?

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Taranum BhatiaLess than a minute ago the poem nicely captures the teachings which the mother nature has to offer. Comment 0 good

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Nasrudheenp ParameswaranLess than a minute ago A fine comparative poem Comment +1 its a nice mix of nature and personal feelings

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Colleen Ruiz4 minutes ago Tale of youth Comment +1 Great poem but could use revision.

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Violet Schod4 minutes ago Beautiful imagery and story. Double check for clarity and it could be better. Comment +1 Nice Job

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Karl Boyer4 minutes ago Interesting

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Sun emerged in sky as usual With full light and looked casual

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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