Saturday, November 12, 2005

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Rating: 5.0

draw on backs?

we'd whisper
brothers still
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Tears In Rain
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Kathrin P. 10 September 2012

the last two lines are my favorite lines. good write!

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Velvet Thorn 30 November 2005

I remember playing this game with my brother.

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Raynette Eitel 13 November 2005

THis is extremely well-done...realistic, yet poetic. Raynette

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Marcy Jarvis 13 November 2005

Oh my god! This one really touches me!

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Adryan Barnathan 12 November 2005

B e a u t i f u l imagery....love thy brother~!

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