Tuesday, July 11, 2006

Back Again Comments

Rating: 4.3

Back on the page again.
Pen in hand a friend.
More noise to send,
Makes your eyes bend.
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JOE POEWHIT
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Sreekala Sukumaran 22 June 2010

Short but well penned you have expressed the feelings so well great work...

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Tanvi Damle 22 January 2010

i luv the way you rhyme! ! beyond marvelous ^^

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Good definition of writer's block. People talk when one communicates to them.

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very good and expressive poem. nice one

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T McH 11 April 2009

I see you and I like you. t x

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Kranthi Pothineni 03 March 2009

Nice...expressing once feelings...good to read

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Ana Zaldivar 29 January 2009

short but meaningful :) well done

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 January 2009

A distant desire, but lets hope

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Debra Weston-collinson 26 January 2009

I liked that, Short sweet and to the point. Gathering a tribe of people. I'll read more....

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 03 January 2009

poems you write are all implicit. it adds to your intelligence but not to broad audience. sice thoughts are worth reaching lay brain, you may relent.

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Gargi Saha 25 September 2008

A lovely poem..............................................................

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Albert Wong 31 August 2008

Yes, come back again, I just hold my pen and ready to contact you as my friend.. Just using the same old pen. because I am an old man Who didn't understand. Google same search my name sfiawong. Good fun....my eyes this night might bend.

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Tanya Stanford 27 August 2008

lol... love the hint of humour. short but impactful. love it.

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Keith Foley 23 August 2008

Like the flow. And the words about the pen being a friend. Good stuff. Keith

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Anne-Marie Kennedy 22 May 2008

Very poignant short poems; says much in few words. Sadness, isolation, but freedom through the written word. Isn't that what all true poets struggle with and seek? ? ?

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Eva Lemari 08 May 2008

i can picture this poem...

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