Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Back Again Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sitting silently beside the sleepy shore
Eyes staring blankly, thoughts drifted away
Pondering on the sweet and warm kisses we've shared
and all those words of love that brightens my day...
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Rajnish Manga 19 October 2015

The poem progresses in a melancholic mood which is also very distressing to the reader. But there is total about turn towards the end when the lovers unite again and everything alters. A quote: Pondering on the sweet and warm kisses we've shared / And love me once again, I pray / Feeling so empty.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 02 May 2015

Sad no more the last 3 lines gave a perfect u-turn of emotions what a twist nice poem as always

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 02 May 2015

SAD no more The last 3 lines gave a u-turn of emotions nice twist.

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