Saturday, February 22, 2014

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I miss what once I thought I knew
sun of yellow, sky of blue,
sweet summer breeze
and swinging through tall trees.
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Smoky Hoss
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Dave Walker 03 March 2014

beautiful Smoky, sometimes there is that one moment in time where we wish we could just go back. A really beautiful poem.

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Valerie Dohren 27 February 2014

Memories of childhood and innocence long sconce gone - very touching and poignant. I am sure we can all relate to this Smoky.

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Juan Olivarez 25 February 2014

Ah yes. Been there, know that feeling. Great work Smoky. My new Dell is not allowing me to rate your poems. I will come back on line later with my phone and do so.

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Joseph Anderson 24 February 2014

Nostalgia just chokes me up.A great reminder of things gone with the winds of time.Sadly we can't return. Smoky -a brief, but endearing poem, though sad, yet a joy to read

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