Babysitter Comments

Intriguing poem Martin, which I liked. I wrote one myself called 'The Babysitter', but it's nothing like this one. Just shows the amount of imagination flying around.

Wow, deep stuff going on in here, and it's pretty true I imagine, depending on circumstance. Would make a wonderful song too, I keep thinking..an original idea, or one of which are getting harder to find, day by day.

Streets are full of them! Well thought out piece of writing. Tom

For the first part of this poem I couldn't help it, needed to move my body on its rhythm as for the second, deep thoughts kept me frozen. Amazing write, pure delight, thank you for share.

Unusual but excellent at the same time, well done

it is little dark but thats why i like it at frist i thought it was about the war but at the end i understood it