Baby Comments

It is not a poem...I mean I heard the same in different languages and in different ways, poems, prose and just like random thoughts.

I had started feeling sorry for you at the beginning of the poem i must say you had me on that. Otherwise it is real nice

Agreed! your poems always have me smiling.Keep up the great job. ._.

once again, very nice. tho i ve heard somethin like it before, u r the only one who can put it this way. keep on writing! -suze

Wonderful. Love has the prettiest outfit in the ink of your pen. Regards, Nibedita.

Now that is very nice-I was holding my breath, because you needed to hear that and nothing hurtful. well written.......I liked that writing.

very sweet.....but why ask the questions? these are things people should tell us anyway without being asked - especially those that supposedly care about us. if more people spoke their minds than there wouldn't be so much insecurity. but that would make things to easy, the poem was very touching and very realistic.

i'ts absolutely brilliant..but i agree with louise..it sounds familiar..but maybe its just based on liz lochhead's ' I wouldn't thank you for a valentine ' poem..in which case u did well

It's very good, but it does sound familiar to something else I heard. But it is nice just the same. Which ones did you write and which ones didnt u?