Thursday, July 26, 2012

Baby Shoes Comments

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Twinkling dew on leaves of pine,
Her face, mirrors sunshine...
With spirit of a songbird,
She chuckles, a happy soul...
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Raihana Abdul Jabbar
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Neetha Sasidharan 05 August 2012

coollllll... a new idea....i hv never seen any poem on this topic.....the reader can imagine the moment when he sees the shoes.....and the way she let him know is also so cool.....u hv grt imaginations...kp writting....grt rhymes...i love rhymes

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Marieta Maglas 31 July 2012

''Perceives that God has blessed them, Husband and Wife, With a little angel, a precious gift...''-wonderful poem about love and marriage, thank you for sharing it.Mari.

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Ken E Hall 26 July 2012

A heart warming poem indeed baby shoes entwined in a story every one loves...very nice... Bookworm eh? well read Amazing Grace by Eric Metaxas...wonderful story...regards

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Saadat Tahir 26 July 2012

what a charming and beautiful piece of poetry lovely write loved it :)

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