Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Baby's Melody Comments

Rating: 5.0

The magic of Divinity I bring with me
from the lands of beyond.
With the blessings of the Gods,
I arrive …
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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2016

Wrapped in my innocence I carry with me the wisdom of the ages, for I too shall teach you unconditional love, forgiveness, sacrifice and patience. i am determined to ride the waves of life....... very nice poem. very poetic usage of words...... love it. tony

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Heather Wilkins 09 June 2013

a beautiful poem. ypour last stanza lovely

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Randy Hogan 13 November 2012

YOU ARE A FLOWER! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I give you a 10 for your beauty and your love which comes from so deep within and for your beauty that kisses the the stars. RANDY ~*~

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Bev Haigh 11 November 2012

Love it, very moving x

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Shahzia Batool 09 November 2012

So innocent, so pure, so beautiful!

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Babatunde Aremu 27 October 2012

Great write. I like this

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Yash Shinde 14 October 2012

lovely awesome, so beautiful waht a rhythm love it

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Kelvin Owusu 07 October 2012

This is wonderfully written, such a great read Wrapped in my innocence I carry with me the wisdom of the ages, for I too shall teach you unconditional love, forgiveness, sacrifice and patience. that line got to me, well done

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Aung Si 06 October 2012

how much gentleness, kindness. Gorgeous! !

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Persian Khushi 03 October 2012

so beautifully penned ''Wrapped in my innocence I carry with me the wisdom of the ages, for I too shall teach you unconditional love, forgiveness, sacrifice and patience.''

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Hans Vr 02 October 2012

Beautiful and moving. A pleasure to read

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Indira Babbellapati 02 October 2012

Wrapped in my innocence I carry with me the wisdom of the ages, for I too shall teach you unconditional love, forgiveness, sacrifice and patience. GREAT THOUGHT!

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Marieta Maglas 01 October 2012

wisdom and angels-beautiful poem...

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Heather Wilson 01 October 2012

Oh, this is just beautiful, a lovely write.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 01 October 2012

i felt my mother telling me those words.... great heart..... keep up writing..... i think words would not suffice to write my happiness after reading this.... eternal...................

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Unwritten Soul 01 October 2012

WOW i feel so attached to your poem, the melody is so striking in smiling and feeling...loved it_Soul

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Valsa George 30 September 2012

A baby descends into this world from lands beyond carrying the magic of divinity wrapped in innocence, carrying the infinity of the spaces, the depths of the earth and the colours of heaven! What beautiful image....! !

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Payal Parande 29 September 2012

pacific, pleasant, pliable.....and incredible thank you so much for sharing mam love payal

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Valerie Dohren 20 September 2012

Beautiful write, very insightful and very well penned.

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Sanjay Mehta 20 September 2012

In the current materialistic world, devoid of ethics, morals very few things are left where one can find purity, inner joy, selfless attitude. Baby till a baby is one such thing, (yes we can call baby a thing because when baby is exposed to this world, baby as expressed, doesn; t remain a baby) ..........................to preserve and to evolve those traits a desire that that he does not surrender his life to me(stanza 3) .

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