Thursday, February 14, 2013

Baby's Breath Comments

Rating: 4.8

Doubt ye not,
The power of words,

For they can build up,
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Macy (Nina) Dvirnak
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Macy Na 17 November 2019

Baby's breath is a flower.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 August 2018

acutely said- Words can wrought sorrow, Or bless one with joy great10++++

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Khairul Ahsan 18 August 2018

'Words, They be not something, With which to toy- Words can wrought sorrow, Or bless one with joy' - - So true! I also liked the comparison, sweetness to a baby's breath.

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Chandan Dey 18 August 2018

It’s a poem which tells us an eternal truth in a magnificent way. Thanks for sharing your thought with us. Chandan

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Adrian Flett 18 August 2018

A wonderful rhyme and structure in the poem. 'Doubt ye not' and 'speak ye not'; the use of ye is telling in its ancientness and universality, which tells us of Baby's Breath and the ancientness or oldness of life. 'Words, They be not something' stresses the two lines through the use of syntax.

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Kelly Kurt 18 August 2018

I left a comment on this over 3 years ago. About the time of her last activity. It is still a nice poem, but........

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Macy Na 17 November 2019

Mmmmhmmmm.

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Macy Na 17 November 2019

Greetings and, salutatoins! I hope you are well. I have new poems. Please read them. I been writing since 2012, even earlier. Lol

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Savita Tyagi 18 August 2018

So true with beautiful last lines. Congratulations.

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Ruta Mohapatra 18 August 2018

So true! Words can build or destroy!

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Pallab Chaudhury 18 August 2018

Wow! So nice and beautifully penned... Congrats for the poem being selected for the POD.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018

A beautiful poem with nice penmanship. Thanks and congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.

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Bharati Nayak 18 August 2018

They can give life, Or cause one to die. - - - - - - - - - - - - - Words can wrought sorrow, Or bless one with joy, - - - - -'Word' formed of letters are very basic to the expressions of our feelings.Had there been no words, there would have been no language, no culture and no civilization.Words are very powerful.It can make or break.We should be very careful of our words when we know we are affecting the listener.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2018

Words can wrought sorrow, Or bless one with joy...........brilliant poetic expression! Many congratulations for this adorable piece of work being selected as POD! (10)

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Saji G. Praleyagiri. 18 August 2018

A NICE PIECE OF LIFE Thank to share the poem.

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Lantz Pierre 18 August 2018

This is all naked rhetoric, assertions without an argument. Show me, don't tell me. I might agree but I haven't been learned anything new. I haven't experienced the pain or elation. Only the boredom.

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Haidee Majola 18 August 2018

So true. Congrats for POD selection.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 August 2017

Power of words, so nicely painted by Macy Dvirank that it became a work of art, A lovely selection as members poem of the day, congrats.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 August 2017

Doubt ye not, The power of words, For they can build up, Or they can desrtoy. Like firey arrows, From the tongue they fly- They can give life, Or cause one to die. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2017

Of regret! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 August 2017

The awesome power of words can make or break a relationship too. Very nice poem. Liked it.Congrats.

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Tom Allport 18 August 2017

a superb poem of understanding the true powers of the spoken word? ...............wonderfully written MD.

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