Thursday, October 15, 2009

Baby Relativity Comments

Rating: 4.8

When a baby is bubbly with her smiles
And plays with herself like a cherub
We like to pick her up and cuddle
Not willing to pass it on to another.
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2009

the last two lines are absolutely true..heaviness in the heart pulls us down..well written and from such a simple incident

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Anusha Subramanian 17 October 2009

Babies are always a good topic to write upon.. Great work.. Lovely write.. I like it..

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Marieta Maglas 15 October 2009

wonderful abstract poem, lovely to read....10++++++++

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Obinna Eruchie 15 October 2009

'When a baby is bubbly with her smiles / And plays with herself like a cherub / We like to pick her up and cuddle / Not willing to pass it on to another. / The infant – feels much light on the arm...' Babies are adorable to carry and play with.

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

Hyderabad, AP, India
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