Thursday, November 20, 2008

Baby P Comments

Rating: 2.7

They broke your back
And hurt you so
Neglecting you
Whilst you would grow
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T S 15 April 2009

A beautiful poem in Honour of a Child who was starved of Love.... a cruel world we live in that's for sure 10/10

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Great poem so sad..... Great write Krista

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Eddie Larkin 23 November 2008

You have said it beautifully about this poor unfortunate child... how anyone can do this to a baby is beyond my understanding. Well done, Amy.

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Tj Becker 22 November 2008

What a sad sad piece. Even the thought of someone hurting a child sets my blood on fire. How can anyone do such a thing. Nicely written

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James Foulk 21 November 2008

a very heart felt piece of beautiful poetry and so well said such a tender poem.

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Blue Eyes 20 November 2008

ur words r gentle and no one is offended u cannot hurt a fly even if u intended reading this poem i couldn`t stand i just fell and stayed on the ground

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Billy Joe Collins 20 November 2008

what is offensive is what they put that child through, your poem shows how much you care in your heart. well wrote and i for one feel blessed that you shared thanks you baby p needs our prayers

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