Friday, January 8, 2016
Baby I Miss You (Ode) Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Baby - o' my love
I'm missing you now,
My loving baby,
I do miss you...
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Roseann Shawiak
16 January 2016
Amitava, still like the original better, it had more substance and depth of feeling and emotion. This one is fine, but have to place it second. Feeling of solitude doesn't have the intensity the first one did! All in all you write very well! Thank you for sharing this one. RoseAnn
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8/1/2025 8:54:33 PM # 1.0.0
Beautiful portrayal of mighty spiritual experience that is love - a voyage of pure bliss, nicely brought forth from the heart with insight. Thanks for sharing Amitava.