Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Baby, I'M Gone! (Part Two) Comments

Rating: 3.0

if tomorrow dont come,
then today is the answer.
love is the key,
and hate is the cancer.
...
Read full text

Eric Cockrell
COMMENTS
Nurain Ali-balogun 25 September 2012

I don't seem to get enough of this poem... 'where the knife's still sharp, but covered with rust.' That must be my favourite lines. I'd like to go to that place too, where I can trust, where I can sleep at night without my eyes and ears at the door, where peace will reign and noone will draw a sword. Extraordinary effort sir.

0 0 Reply
Nurain Ali-balogun 04 April 2012

I seem to like the Part Two more. Brilliantly written sir.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success