Sunday, November 25, 2012
Baby I Love You On And On Comments
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Baby I love you on and on
You are like a fantastic morn
We'll ride on our dream's unicorn
And go as far as horizon
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8/21/2025 12:42:42 PM # 1.0.0
Hi Asif, your poem has a freewheeling style and a spontaneity I enjoy. A the here and there would improve its flow and in my view morning rather than the archaic morn would be better (even though it's less of a rhyme) ? Good writing, I would sum up...