Baby I Love You 10 + + Comments

i love it.....good flow and good words...love it...again

Great write with lovely flow and thythm and very interesting notes on the ZamZam! !

A deeply pround expression of love 10++- I love the rhymning couplets.

the last couplet is my favorite, it is smewhat to me comical and irony, great job :)

last couplet was the best

good flow... thanks for your notes on the Zamzam

Oh! A very nice romantic poem with lovely comparisons written with rhyme and rhythm.Thanks for enlightening us about ZamZam the holy waters.Thanks for the kind invite to share and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

Great notes for this lovely poem: -)

I like it. It is a well written declaration of your love that has feeling in it. It flows and the rhythm is very nice.

it is a piece of love with deep bounded in heart well done

Great rhythm, nice meaning and well written..everyone knows u can write well Asif, keep it going_SOul

so romantically piece of written.i love it.let me add something more.some say love your beloved even more than god.it may be the way that guide you to the god.that love is the god almighty himself.i do not know if it is true or not. cheers~nb

so great and beautiful written. i love all the parts of this work so fresh and wise.

Woh good.I loved it very much

yeah excellent one again.....and the lines Baby I love you more than mom You are my water of Zamzam Baby I love you less than God But you are my home and abroad is superb! ! »so close«

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