I feel so unhappy today
Tomorrow seems light-years away
Baby I live in yesterday
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the word bliss adds beauty to this poem.. xellent write..heads off
Great poem Asif Andalib sir. i like your word flow and how it rhymes.
A lovely poignant poem, filled with beautiful memories, great write! !
simple, beautiful, full of love and care this is really a nice poem.Keep inking Asif.Liked it very much.
hey, Asif... i like it.. and i hope your 'i remember' will turn into present tense soon.
as your words used here...its so beautiful and i loved it, good work »so close«
The remembrance of yesterday. Another nice piece of work from you. Thank you. E.K.L.