Sunday, July 12, 2009

Baby Girl Comments

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Baby Girl… For you and only you my heart beats true.
When I hear your voice my legs get weak.
When we have to go my heart skips a beat.
Life has been tough but it wasn’t enough.
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Gerald Hamilton Jr
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Chitra - 14 July 2009

a passionate write...a melody that ryhmes with a heart filled with love

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a passionated write beautifully wrtten...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 July 2009

Just hold your head high for when the time is right. I will hold you for the rest of our lives......................... .love respires smooth yet it smooches by breath...............extremely passionate by eloquence of love, let it ropple by the fill, wrought ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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~ Jon London ~ 12 July 2009

Beautiful expression of love, you've captured the words that will melt your ladies heart my friend.....well penned

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Gerald Hamilton Jr

Gerald Hamilton Jr

Kankakee, IL
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