Saturday, July 4, 2009

Baby Girl Comments

Rating: 4.8

When I was just a baby girl
I'd look up to the skies
I'd brush away the tousled hair
that fell into my eyes.
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Marea Johnson
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Paul Hansford 05 July 2009

An intriguing poem. It leaves me wondering what happened to this little girl later. Are there the seeds of a longer poem here?

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Majida Abdul Latif 05 July 2009

It really wonderul poem and it reminds me when i was child and it is the same with everyone who rea the poem. Wonderful work.

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Louis Rams 04 July 2009

beautifully written. a double ten

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Deborah Cromer 04 July 2009

I really like this. From one baby girl to another, you say alot in your writing. DC

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