'Baby Dreams' Comments

Such an enjoyable poem to read! When my daughter was a baby I used to love to watch her sleep and as I'd see the little eyes moving under their closed lids, I would have these same thoughts! What is she dreaming about? You've come up with a list of so many things that relate to a child's life. Beautifully written poem!

........oh this is a wonderful poem...loved reading every line....

wonderfully created poem and liked its contents also.

What a perfect picture of the holy season, The select colours and the landscape are very much appreciatable, thanks a lot for the seasonal greeting card,10+++

A beautiful poem.....Angelic dreams.....You deserve more than 10, Whitney!

Really a dream of a clear minded crystal baby doll all are there expect wine a well written understanding poem, Thank you Author,10+

waa......too good......charming and lovely rhyme.........thanks for sharing....

Took me back to my childhood. There is an innocence to your poem that is so refreshing.

I'm not a baby, but when I was a little girl I had similar dreams... and to be honest they do come back to me at time when I fall asleep... Let's face it all of us keep the inner child :) Wonderful write...

Varied baby dreams woven in wonderful poetic tapastery with music of their own. Loved reading it. CP

You have allowed the reader to image what a baby may dream. Thank you for sharing your write with us. Scott

The imagry was great in this poem.....i give it a 9.5

i wish i was that young again, dreaming about cool toys and simple yet exciting adventures, thanx for the journey, great poem 10 :)