Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Saturday, November 17, 2012

Baby Don'T Let My Pen Stop Comments

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Baby don't let my pen stop
Make it cherry on the top

Baby don't kill my sweet dreams
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Asif Andalib
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Hamid Negah 21 November 2012

Beautiful poem...i loved it...keep writting.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 18 November 2012

Very fine work of art, Asif. Of course, let not anyone stop you from using your pen. Keep on posting.

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Hazel Durham 18 November 2012

Beautiful with great rhythm and flow, thanks for sharing.

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Sallam Yassin 17 November 2012

it is alway need a couple of wings To fly a couple to walk A couple to talk and for love a couple of hearts.

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Caroline Bulleck 17 November 2012

This poem is so full of meaning and emotion. I can tell it's written form the heart. I like that. I give it a rating of 10.

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Erica Borges 17 November 2012

Please, for the love you have for this woman...just go and say it. Life can end any moment.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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