Sunday, February 1, 2009

Baby, Come And Save Me... Comments

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Baby, maybe your the one that saves me..
could you maybe... take the chance fly away with me!
maybe then you'll see, all the love I've had for you.
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Dislocated Heart
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Allysyn Bryant 01 February 2009

Do you truly need anyone to come and save you? Did you hold on because of your baby or because you pushed yourself to? Thinking it was her when really it was you all the long? Love lasts forever when its true...no matter the distance...no matter the troubles...no matter whats happened, happens, or will happen.. I like this poem.

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Catrina Heart 01 February 2009

as going through your composition, it seems to me this is a song not reading yet your last part...and i was right...beautiful *DC* hope you'll have this with melody...great write...10/10

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