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i heard silence on glass brims fading laughter footsteps fading echoes of guests gone swallowed by shadow depths twinkling in a night sky burning like meteorites skimming off stratosphere bouncing off spent lines as my eyes sparkled diamonds galaxies surrounding a single hosted earth pulse companionship bubbling fleeting fleeting gone dust life squeaked spice sounds gathered spread tables symbolic symmetries (will format and dedicate it later, presently out and about on a misty grey day walking)

Seems the party is over. Very well suggested ambiance. The scene is seen like in a poetic dream. Good work!

he true emotions of the hosts, once the guests left...Congratulation Miroslava Odalovic

the true emotions of the hosts, once the guests left...Congratulation Miroslava Odalovic

When the lights turn off Window panes stand broken Miroslava Odalovic once composed this poem three years ago the drop line shows. So many dimension....i simply enjoyed the lines.

A beautiful poem with an eye catching title. 'Their laughter will fade out Their footsteps will be swallowed By clear night sky' Oh, what a beautiful expression! Just loved it.

Good poem. Guest gone blue returns! seems familiar!

Try sleep for the day. Good poem.Thanks.

I loved the title! ! ! and reading these lines make me occupied with some smiles hahahaha...i dont know but there is something pulling me to do that is than Unwritten hand pulling me? haha_Soul

Great poem, I like the imageries that keeps the reader involved.