Friday, July 21, 2017
Baby Blue Eyes Comments
Rating: ★4.9
Baby blue eyes
Crying
Softly
Whispering
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Sandra Feldman
21 July 2017
Eyes that speak Not always, the most discrete. The flowing words and images are very nicely done. The painful end, surprising but won.
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Richard Wlodarski
21 July 2017
Sandra, the ending was painful to write, but cathartic. Thanks for the creativity of your feedback. Always greatly appreciated!
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8/3/2025 4:02:55 AM # 1.0.0
There is a twinge of sadness here. The blue eyes- that may mean the colour blue. Or blue may be the metaphor for sadness. Sadness in the eyes of the innocent....A great poem, Richard.
Right on both accounts, M.J. What's interesting is that you cued in on the eyes of the innocent...the victim. He too has blue eyes.