Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Baby Comments

Rating: 2.8

times change, people change
but you and i will always be the same.
stay with me, i'll set you free
don't you see? it's meant to be.
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Amber AandB
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Good one

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Ralph The Elf 25 June 2012

this is splendid, well written

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Kaitlynn Tiara Bradley 30 August 2011

I really like this poem it reminds me of me and my ex that resentlyy broke up with me in March.

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Kaitlynn Tiara Bradley 30 August 2011

I really like this poem it reminds me of me and my ex that resentlyy broke up with me in March.

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Kaitlynn Tiara Bradley 30 August 2011

I really like this poem it reminds me of me and my ex that resentlyy broke up with me in March.

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Kaitlynn Tiara Bradley 30 August 2011

I really like this poem it reminds me of me and my ex that resentlyy broke up with me in March.

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well done, i really enjoyed this poem. it was short and sweet, i want to see more of you r writings :) keep it up.

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Poet Of The River 26 August 2011

how romantic. ^v^ Good job. 'bees to honey' I love the metaphor!

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Elizabeth Grace 17 August 2011

I quite enjoy the imagery you use here!

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