Tuesday, November 18, 2014

Babu's Touch Comments

Rating: ★4.5

Sitting there, next to him
In silence
Holding hands, listening to the sounds of us breathing, his being heavier
In silence
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Anabahati Mlay
peace silence strength Iam courage
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Chinedu Dike 11 April 2015

I like the way you portrayed the communicative silence felt between both of you and the absolute tranquillity that ensued as you sat very close to him while he was sick. It's a nice poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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