Sunday, October 25, 2015

Babes In Arms Comments

Rating: 4.8

Babes in Arms.
By Sharon Maria Moemise
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Amitava Sur 07 November 2015

Apparently our society's face looks to be very calm and peaceful like the surface of sea, but the vicious under current and turbulence always persists in it.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2015

Any poem of yours that I read, I happen to like it. This is the third one I am reading, and all three are quite good. 'where your parents are the beasts huge fangs awaiting, you as their feast' - It's so unfortunate for any innocent child to have parents like this! 'If you were that little child Whose lifeless little body found in the wild Ravaged by the same humans, who pretend to mourn Would you even have wanted to be born? ' - Deeply touched!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 26 October 2015

Like the poem.... feel it.

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Maria Sharon Moemise 26 October 2015

Thank you

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 October 2015

mm.. I've just left a comment on another of your poem, so I don't want to repeat myself.. only say that I abhor those vile, 'subhuman' people who abuse of children (and women) .. and quite often, those people are inside the family! thanks for sharing, Maria Peace

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Maria Sharon Moemise 25 October 2015

Thank you for your review and for understanding my story on both poems,

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