Babes in Arms.
By Sharon Maria Moemise
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Any poem of yours that I read, I happen to like it. This is the third one I am reading, and all three are quite good. 'where your parents are the beasts huge fangs awaiting, you as their feast' - It's so unfortunate for any innocent child to have parents like this! 'If you were that little child Whose lifeless little body found in the wild Ravaged by the same humans, who pretend to mourn Would you even have wanted to be born? ' - Deeply touched!
mm.. I've just left a comment on another of your poem, so I don't want to repeat myself.. only say that I abhor those vile, 'subhuman' people who abuse of children (and women) .. and quite often, those people are inside the family! thanks for sharing, Maria Peace
Thank you for your review and for understanding my story on both poems,
Apparently our society's face looks to be very calm and peaceful like the surface of sea, but the vicious under current and turbulence always persists in it.