Babel Comments

Scary truth....but beautiful in its description.

I agree with Allan & John, another ten, methinks.

THIS POEM HAS A WONDERFUL FLOW HERBERT, AS DOES MOST OF YOUR POETRYAND THE THEME IS REAL AND SOMEWHAT SCARY IN IT'S TRUTH wARM REGARDS AJS

This is fantastic in its imagery, I could swear that I know the landscape. The end of the world and some privileged people survive. Is it because they lived properly before things started getting dicey? Wonderful poem. JW

Very moving poem! You've certainly captured the 'end of the world' feeling in this one. To be the lucky ones to survive such a thing would be miraculous. I loved the vivid pictures of your land here. Nice one. Sincerely, Mary