Sunday, January 22, 2006

Babel, A Sonnet Comments

Rating: 4.2

Oh happy he who in his ignorance
Can spend his busy days in fruitfulness,
Who has no third eye for the clues of chance
And builds a scaffold for his happiness.
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Linda Hepner
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Chuck Audette 23 January 2006

Wasn't quite sure I got this one; too many interpretations came to mind. Still very lovely and mysterious piece of writing. -chuck I wish there was a tower, still, instead of just a sonnet I think I'd feel powerful to get to stand upon it.

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Hugh Cobb 22 January 2006

A fine Petrarchian sonnet, Linda. The Talmudic theme/Biblical story are seen through a very modern lens here. Good writing. With warm regards, Hugh

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***** ********* 22 January 2006

Great interpretation of the original fall Linda! Understanding is everything. 10 from Tai, loving a sonnet with a twinkle in it's eye.

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Gina Onyemaechi 22 January 2006

Amazing wording, Linda. Wow! ! !

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