Six remnants. Your shadows acutely damaged:
Severely tortured, are your survivors.
Two braids slouched on the shoulders
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Almedia, you have written a master piece and marriage nor honeymooning have hurt your writting. Just keep up the good work, you are already back in the flow and you can only get better. Your Pal, Lynn.
A classic one. From the first line to last is like a sculpture someone doing with the stoneness of heart. No magic, no exaggeration, no extra emotional galloping but with mathematical accuracy, its a complete poem. Perhaps a good writing always needs the proper analysis. But how I don't know. So I was so eager to send my reaction. Write more. Regards, pranab 10+++