Babe Comments

Still TOP Marks 5 Stars 10 points! Worded in full excellence.

I cite you: Everlasting never parting, true love never dies, the bond of love is unbreakable. Immortal poem, dear Tom

To My Favourites! Thank you!

Excellent poem so touching my heart, I so admired this beautiful poem 5 Stars full

Touching poem and very sad but well captured. Thank you for sharing, Tom!

Babe hold my hand And understand How close can we be.......so touching with nice theme. it is true that a babe holds the hand of elder and feels safe. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

excellent love- Through infinite time Everlasting never parting Always reaching- reaching Babe hold my hand 10+++

Enjoying love while life last. Not even death can erase love. Eloquently expressed!

Lovely lines that are loaded with love! Well done!

A lovely piece of poetry dear poet! My favorite lines: ‘Our hearts/The line so fine/Yours and mine/Loves divine’. I have so far read just two of your poems! I love the way you pen dear poet! (For this poem 10) .

Lovely lyrics! They could sound perfectly accompanied by a guitar!

Such a nice poem, well worded. When one is in love he is sort of elevated. A agree with you: Loves divine Through infinite time Everlasting never parting... God bless you!

before we see the strand that pulls and parts - - beautiful rhythmic expression.

A beautiful declaration of love. One is lucky to find such an enduring supportive love in their lifetime. After years of disappointment and experiencing love lost I found the man of my dreams, my darling husband so this poem resonates with me. Full marks for a lovely write.

Straight to the point, ha Tom? Short but ever so sweet! 10+++

i wonder what your (nonexistent) Poet's Notes would say. hmm? and a little punctuation would help me in this one. AND it sounds sort of like a dreaded love poem! i don't care much for love poems. hee-hee. bri :)

facts of life we all age in this life's worldly stage why rage all our lives we passed away this way so for how much longer do you expect to stay to the youth now give way all our lives we pass

I'm with Electric Lady on this one. Added to My Favourite Poems list. Lovely declaration of love. Such tenderness from the pen and heart of a man.

Babe hold my hand Forever A beautiful poem on true love.

gosh! ! ! ! ! This poem sums up so succinctly what we are all looking -a love that lasts forever. Im an incurable romantic Tom, love this poem especially the last 4 lines. full marks