Monday, April 23, 2012

Babe Comments

Rating: 4.4

Babe hold my hand
And understand
How close can we be
Before we see
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Tom Allport
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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 September 2024

Still TOP Marks 5 Stars 10 points! Worded in full excellence.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 September 2024

I cite you: Everlasting never parting, true love never dies, the bond of love is unbreakable. Immortal poem, dear Tom

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

To My Favourites! Thank you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

Excellent poem so touching my heart, I so admired this beautiful poem 5 Stars full

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2020

Touching poem and very sad but well captured. Thank you for sharing, Tom!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2018

Babe hold my hand And understand How close can we be.......so touching with nice theme. it is true that a babe holds the hand of elder and feels safe. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 May 2018

excellent love- Through infinite time Everlasting never parting Always reaching- reaching Babe hold my hand 10+++

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Enjoying love while life last. Not even death can erase love. Eloquently expressed!

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Lovely lines that are loaded with love! Well done!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2018

A lovely piece of poetry dear poet! My favorite lines: ‘Our hearts/The line so fine/Yours and mine/Loves divine’. I have so far read just two of your poems! I love the way you pen dear poet! (For this poem 10) .

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Mihaela Pirjol 06 January 2018

Lovely lyrics! They could sound perfectly accompanied by a guitar!

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Valentin Savin 29 December 2017

Such a nice poem, well worded. When one is in love he is sort of elevated. A agree with you: Loves divine Through infinite time Everlasting never parting... God bless you!

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Upendra Upm 15 August 2017

before we see the strand that pulls and parts - - beautiful rhythmic expression.

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Simone Inez Harriman 07 August 2017

A beautiful declaration of love. One is lucky to find such an enduring supportive love in their lifetime. After years of disappointment and experiencing love lost I found the man of my dreams, my darling husband so this poem resonates with me. Full marks for a lovely write.

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Bernard Snyder 06 August 2017

Straight to the point, ha Tom? Short but ever so sweet! 10+++

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Bri Edwards 07 July 2017

i wonder what your (nonexistent) Poet's Notes would say. hmm? and a little punctuation would help me in this one. AND it sounds sort of like a dreaded love poem! i don't care much for love poems. hee-hee. bri :)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 June 2017

facts of life we all age in this life's worldly stage why rage all our lives we passed away this way so for how much longer do you expect to stay to the youth now give way all our lives we pass

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Practicing Poetess 08 June 2017

I'm with Electric Lady on this one. Added to My Favourite Poems list. Lovely declaration of love. Such tenderness from the pen and heart of a man.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 April 2017

Babe hold my hand Forever A beautiful poem on true love.

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Norah Tunney 11 April 2017

gosh! ! ! ! ! This poem sums up so succinctly what we are all looking -a love that lasts forever. Im an incurable romantic Tom, love this poem especially the last 4 lines. full marks

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