Baba Comments

if I lose myself, voice turns mumchance, To pull be back in your lap. Perforating the arrows, Of disgust, despairs, And despondencies, You shield me. No matter if I get caught, By those phantom hands, I know I will still find you, you wipe my teardrops. Loosing myself in the heart of darkness. I've always got you, By my side, holding, My cold numb hands, In the kayak, Of your loving arms. Let me walk, A little slower, Baba, Lift me up and tossed me, In the air, always reflected, My faith I read so carefully your poem sooo well that i collected all these points. I was reading the poem thinking that you are writing all these notes about God Almighty. Only at the end i saw the word Father. But these words are really applicable to God your Father.. Am i right dear poetess? You know this is your best poem. sooooooooooo wonderful.i am not praising you for the sake of praising. I really mean it. Love your simplicity in words and expressions. Thank you, thank you, thank you for inviting me to read this. God bless you. tony