Tuesday, January 1, 2008

B1 Into Nothing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kiss me into nothing
Make me disappear
Fingertip my heartstrings
Relieve me of all fear
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Original Unknown Girl 14 January 2008

Wowser! fabulous work here. Love it. HG: -) xx

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Francis Duggan 03 January 2008

Good poem Bill very clever usage of words with good rhythm, well done

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William Jackson 01 January 2008

Well said. Universal appeal! Great write.

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