B: Xxxxv: Measured Response Comments

Douglas, i just read this AGAIN, & i plan to put it into October's showcase within the next two weeks. Thanks. bri :) yeah, i STILL LIKE IT! ! ! I LIKE IT A LOT.

AH! I SEE AN EARLIER COMMENT FROM ME NOW, BELOW. :) BRI

now, THIS ONE i like........quite a bit and would put into a future showcase. now to MyPoemList. i doubt Winter could help much with your other desires e.g. absence of grime.....except to cover grime temporarily with snow and ice. bri :)

been here. :) :) :)

I feel the same way about winter, hating the cold. Sometimes I even struggle to get through winter. M. Walker.

a reader needs to be careful to NOT think that you want “freedom from”: world peace et al. or DO you! ? ha ha did you talk winter into giving you what you wanted? where is MY “happiness with cuddling”? ? ? maybe I’ll get that if I ever get senile and placed in a nursing home with sympathetic 40-year-old female aides? bri :) interesting write

Very good, imaginative. M.Walker.

Douglas Amazing poetry here keep on writing

A very measured response of happiness and immediacy over more esoteric issues, who wouldn't.