Thursday, July 30, 2009

Bilove Ran Out/I/B Comments

Rating: 2.4

the simple account
– love ran out
no-longer sustained by
medieval bracelets charmed
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Ivan Donn Carswell
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Margaret Alice Second 25 February 2023

Deeply moving, the pain so sharp, love based on impossible dreams and fairytales, and now you are also free! Excellent, beautiful poem.

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Callie Carroll 10 November 2011

The last stanza is perfect. Love ran out, but never my admiration for your writing.

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