Friday, October 20, 2006

Bbarely Alive/B Comments

Rating: 4.8

I’m barely alive
I’m barely breathing
I forget how to speak
And now I’m not seeing
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Dawn Michelle
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Melvina Germain 20 October 2006

You paint an absolutely frightful picture, I know this can certainly happen to any of us at any time in the future, especially as we age. It is not a nice thing to look forward to. Hopefully we have peace in our hearts and be aware of our inner strength in order to move forward and deal with the unpleasantries of this last part of our lives. It is a worry not to be able to see what is around you, but if one can take in the beauty that surrounds us now on a daily basis, maybe we will have enough stored in our memories to last us during this trying time. Excellent poem, thankyou for the read.---Melvina---

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Joshua Fegley 20 October 2006

I know how you feel Dawn; I can empathize completely. Later.....Joshua.

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Dawn Michelle

Dawn Michelle

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