Tuesday, March 7, 2006

Bacceptance Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the midst of the night,
Surrendered my fight.
Struggling through tears,
And times long gone by.
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Barry A. Lanier
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Laurie X3 20 November 2017

I love how it built up to the third stanza. Made me respond out loud, No you don't need to. And then again I. Your last stanza when I said to myself yes, the point of our mistakes is just that, to be understood by ourselves, not explained to others. For it is only on us what steps we take, not them.

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