Thursday, May 21, 2009

Ba Poor Man's Dream Comments

Rating: 4.3

A family of eight and times were hard, so very hard
The poor man a dishwasher in an exclusive restaurant
Serving the rich and famous, CEO's and Senators
His highlight on most days a nap during his break
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Barry A. Lanier
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Ken E Hall 04 June 2009

A well told story...you never saw the trees till they were gone, the poem has a true meaning +++10 regards...... uavaniceday

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Saadat Tahir 22 May 2009

One CEO and also one Senator weren't doing so well Both suffering from gout and an incurable insomnia A cadre of physicians and advisors working on a solution Seeking the atronomers and charlatans around the world Both having dreams of one day being a poor man very nice barry...what a paradox...but how true very nice lines cheers

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Inner Whispers 22 May 2009

hello, Barry...a soul's peacefulness cannot be achieved on how one spend his life extravagantly... it is the satisfaction of what and who ou are. But do any has satisfaction at all? man always seek. Beautiful poem. I like it. It made me think.

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an interesting and wise story Barry..always you end your stories with surprise for the reader..

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