(b) 9 (Pain/Longing) My Light..... Comments

Sweet write TO. Lovely read and so well constructed. Love Ernestine XXX

Lovely piece filled with an intense longing... holy or perhaps a sacramental calling- romance...truly beautiful! ! Blessings ~ Debora

compelling and deep tones...troubling. fine read. -Tailor

T. O....IN SOME WAY, YOU HAVE CREATED A LIMBO STATE OF MIND OR SOUL..... OR PERHAPS A ROMANCE GONE AWRY, I GUESS.... TELL YOU WHAT THOUGH, MYSTIQUE IS A VIRTUE OF POETIC MASTERY, SO EITHER WAY I MUST SAY....JOB WELL DONE, AS PER USUAL, YOUNG LADY'''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

A beautiful write....love the way this flows......as for your senuality if nothing else it works very well in discriptive words of poetry.......